Tuesday, November 29, 2005

Abyss ...

I see it.

It looks inviting .

I decide to avoid it.

I move away from the standpoint.

I am pulled back.

It lies there, deep, mysterious, surreal and ...... yeah inviting.

I take a plunge to experience what it is like to see the abyss.

Water cuts like a knife, i beat that, move towards the abyss.

Weeds block my way ....... I still keep moving, I am approaching it, the abyss.

Quite a struggle, yet the abyss ....... is calling.

I move and move .. till my lungs ache ... and I am completly deprived of air.

Yet i move on .... and on towards the abyss.

I can't take this ...... and my body shudders ... survival instinct kicks in ........

I am pushed back .... I am shaken ..... I head back ... albeit involuntarily.

I hit the surface , gasping for air.

I relax .... I look back.

The Abyss .... lies inviting .. right where it was.

There is an ABYSS which most of us have come across ....... in our lives.

11 comments:

Casablanca said...

survival instinct kicks in ........

It always does. And I'm happy for that.

Jay said...

@Casa,

Survival instinct .. is a boon! If it were just not that way ....things would have been very different!

rik said...

Nice Post!!

Therez an Abyss at every instant. But what if its varying??

RR said...

Hey, First time.

Good Blog.

In your 7 things tag, u mentioned BMW 7 series to be best in class. Dude pls dont forget the S class or did u thought it belongs to some stratospheric league...in that case I am fine.

Though sorry for being emotional.

Jay said...

#Rik,

If the abyss itself is varying? As in ......?

#Yogi,

Thanks for stopping by.
Thanks :-)
Ah ....a Mecedes/Mclaren fan? I guess I had also mentioned about Lambhorgini and Ferrari's. Well, everyone is allowed their favourites and these are MINE. Thus, S class in the league of Lambhorgini? I guess they are just different segments dude!

//Though sorry for being emotional.

Hey chill man. Its fine! :-)

RR said...

A mercedes fan alright but dont like that combo merc-mclaren. My loyalties are firmly placed with ferrari, when it comes to racing.

Jay said...

@Yogi,

Ah join the club my friend! Scuderia Ferrari rocks!

Gangadhar said...

Nice one indeed...
Btw Gud to see you on my blog!I blogrolled you..

Jay said...

#Gangadhar,

Thanks. :-)

Joyee said...

Nice post!!

Jay said...

# Joyee,

Ah ... yeah :-)